18th
The Pigeon Comes and Leves (First grade writing assignment)
One day a pigeon came to our house. My mom opened the garage the pigeon went in the garage. That pigeon is fat. We can get pretty close to it. She is cool. But there is one problem: What? We do not now where she will live. I think she left a minute ago. My sister said to put the pigeon in the bird’s cage. The pigeon is pretty tome**. Her name is dimond. I like her a lot. That pigeon is neat.
One day she went under the car. Now she on the chimminey! I hope she dosen’t fall in the fireplace. I do not now if I told you this? she is brave. she is blak*. I like to see her evrey day. She is fun. The pigeon is so tome**. I had tons of fun with her.
I hope she will be ok I wonder if she’ll come in the hawse. she will be a good pet. This morning I saw a pigeon. It was not a gril it was a boy. he lookt here -> he lookt there <- then he want here. ^ I have a problom my bird named Diamnd is not comeing any more. I gust she will not come back until February. I am going to miss her. My sister was waching tv, I was waching nature. I have two birds. Well I almost have a good sister. My bird loved spray milt*** it is January. she still is not here. How long will it take her!
Two weeks the end
Selected corrections:
*black
**tame
***milletÂ
